Monday, November 30, 2009

Sunday, November 29, 2009

wikipedia edit

The article that I chose to edit on Wikipedia was the one about "Invisible Children". This article contained very little information about what the movie and organization was actually about and what they have actually accomplished. So, I updated the site to include this information on Friday (11/23/09). I checked periodically over the break and my edits page has not changed. As of today (11/29/09), all of my changes are still being displayed. There is a warning on the page that states that the article's "tone or style may not be appropriate for Wikipedia", but this message was there before my changes were made. The changes can be seen below:

ORIGINAL



EDITED